Stargazing

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This girl is more than a wildflower.

She finds only herself when looking up.

She dances in the streets when it begins to rain.

Her eyes are as blue as the stormiest ocean.

Her smile is as brilliant as the freshest spring days.

Each night brings darkness, but she only sees light.

She finds her own path in the midst of the forest. 

Even when the sunrise has come through and through.

She never stops dreaming for the sentence of you.

When the sun comes up and our dreams go away;

When the sun comes up and takes away the nebulas;

When the sun comes up, she stills finds a way to be stargazing.


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29 Comments Add yours

  1. Coming Out of
    The Rain When
    It Pours Hardest

    Awaking

    Dream

    Within

    Seeing

    Sunshine
    With Wind😊

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  2. Navin says:

    Profound writing….

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  3. She sounds pretty awesome

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  4. Nawazish says:

    Beautiful work!❤

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  5. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you so much for the lovely comment. I appreciate you reading!

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  6. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thanks so much, Navin. I’m glad you liked it.

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  7. Always A Pleasure
    With SMiLes Jade😊

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  8. J. M. Lilin says:

    The stars themselves kiss her goodnight. 💙

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  9. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you! I truly appreciate the support.

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  10. Beautiful poetry

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  11. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you. I cannot appreciate the kind feedback enough.

    Like

  12. Lovely piece here. ❤️❤️

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  13. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked it. 🌻

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  14. Navin says:

    You’re very welcome, J….

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  15. kimmagic says:

    Wonderfully written 👏🏽👏🏽

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  16. You are most welcome 🌺🌹🌺

    Like

  17. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you so much! I appreciate the comment.

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  18. fauxcroft says:

    Amazingly beautiful, so full of imagery 🙏 Faux

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  19. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you so much, Faux. That means a ton to me.

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  20. Very beautiful ❤🌹

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  21. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you! I truly appreciate the kind words.

    Like

  22. Soo lovely. I really enjoyed reading it🤗👏

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  23. You’re welcome

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  24. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you so much! I’m so happy to hear that.

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  25. Bryze says:

    “She was elusive. She was today. She was tomorrow. She was the faintest scent of a cactus flower, the flitting shadow of an elf owl. We did not know what to make of her.”

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  26. J. M. Lilin says:

    Very beautiful. Thank you both for sharing and for reading.

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  27. Bryze says:

    Aw! Thank YOU for sharing! I deeply admire your work! Could you check out some some of my post?

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  28. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you, Bryze. That really means something to me. I appreciate your kindness and support.
    Of course I will! 🙂

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  29. Bryze says:

    Thank you!

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