Sweet Riptide


I want to belong to you.

I love the magnetic pull of your gaze when we meet.

We have been connected since the day we met in the forest.

Countless dreams shared in our separate constellations.

No ocean kept us apart as long as we could read the other.

It is a dangerous grace that keeps me still.

Until you show up in the salty, ocean breeze.

Bittersweet emotions that feel so whole.

A sweet riptide that pulls me in each time.

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8 Comments Add yours

  1. Muserista says:

    Beautiful !💙

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Greatest Arts Originate
    In Oceans Of Unrequited
    Love Boats On Different
    Paths Riding Same


    Poem Jade 🌊

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  3. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you! I appreciate it.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you. I appreciate your support so much.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Thanks Jade i Appreciate
    Your Poetry So Much
    Uniquely Original
    And Inspiring

    With SMiles😊

    Liked by 1 person

  6. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thanks, Benjamin! I always appreciate feedback.


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