The Unsigned Writer
Neverland
Poetry By, J. M. Lilin
Oh, Peter Pan, I need a friend.
I am lonely down in this unusual land.
Come down here yourself or let my dreams transcend.
Oh, Peter Pan, bring me a different life.
Too many crowds with a million words in between.
Saying them every place but never knowing what they mean.
I want to find myself on a different surface with stars so bright.
Oh, Peter Pan, arms folded, waiting far above.
I am far too old to spend my time wondering.
Far too old to have all friendships that I am imagining.
I am too old to be daydreaming at my window for your love.
Oh, Peter Pan, I have waited long enough in this land.
Come down here and behold.
Your eyes of gold.
Take me to your home – oh how wonderful – neverland.
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Very well penned! 😊
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This was so good J. We all dream of somethings that we want to have. Dreams are dearer to us sometimes than even the reality. Excellent. 😇
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Thank you! Appreciate the feedback. 😊
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Love your perspective – and I agree. Only, I believe that dreams are what make us who we are. Thank you for such a wonderful comment.
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This is such a beautiful poem! ❤ I always imagine flying away with Peter Pan, this really put my feelings into words ❤
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I’m so glad you could relate. 💙Sometimes an imaginary friend is just what we need.
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Lovely as usual, J😊❤️ you are back😍😍
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And your comments make me smile as always. Thanks for the wonderful feedback. I’m glad to be creating again.
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Hihihih Always my pleasure, J😊🙏🏽
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He loves to make an entrance
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Haha, yes he does. Always one for fun.
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Great, great line: “Too many crowds with a million words in between.” Paints such a nice image.
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Love the wonderful feedback, Bejamin. Thank you for taking the time to read.
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Welcome! You always bring something cool to read.
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That is very kind and inspiring. Thank you so much! I’ll do my best to keep the creativity up.
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