Silent Spin


She grew some wings and flew away.

He grew a tree and earned a friend.

The apple fell to find the one and only.

The vine reaches far and wide for the light.

You will find that the world might spin;

Just a little hastier if you give it a purpose.

To show you the beauty in the gaze.

The gaze of nature itself, reflected in the stars.

If only you would stop to watch it grow.

Let the color flow and create a river.

Yet black and white could give an ocean.

It does not have to be complex or simple.

Just a given word could give a twist.

The world can spin in the bitter silence.


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8 Comments Add yours

  1. Lia says:

    Jade, this one tingles my soul at this moment. Wow… very beautiful lines and images in here, created with what feels like pure flow. Gorgeous!! ✨

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  2. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you, Lia. I’m so glad to hear from you and I appreciate the lovely feedback. It’s good to hear my words could reach someone the same as they reached me.

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  3. Lia says:

    “It’s good to hear my words could reach someone the same as they reached me” — Yes, that is the ultimate writer-reader connection isn’t it! Well put 💗

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  4. J. M. Lilin says:

    Amen! Thanks again for stopping by.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Great tension and release in each line. Marvelous throughout!

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  6. J. M. Lilin says:

    Wonderful feedback. I appreciate it.

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  7. Welcome. Hope you’re doing well!

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  8. J. M. Lilin says:

    As I hope you are as well. Thanks again, Benjamin. 🌻

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