How can you fall in love with what is not real?
I must ask the stars what they think of this sensation.
It is hard to navigate with a compass that has gone off course.
Thinking of the boy I met in the forest.
A million days before and a million miles from here.
Ask him what his name was, and he would change it every time.
Eyes green like the pines, eyes reflecting like the pond.
He goes where he wants to be and becomes whichever melody he pleases.
He is steady like the elder but as free as the sky itself.
I want to run away but he always stop me at the edge.
He became the forest to save a soul.
Forest boy has no family because he is infinite as space.
Pausing with each beating turn the planet takes.
Gentle when he closes the door and still when he falls.
Transfiguring himself into a form of peace in mind.
Forest boy and I have become so close and so far.
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Lovely read. I loved the theme of this poem. 😍😍
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SMiles Dear Jade Romeo And
Juliet Teach A Grand Lesson
Romances
Lasting
Forever Now
Die Before They
Start Unrequiting
Loving Treasure
Art
Lasts
Forever Now
Every Poet’s Dream
Forever Empty Filling
Precipice Tween Hell And
Heaven Bitter Sweet Eternity
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Thank you so much! I truly appreciate the kind feedback
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Aw yes, what a lovely fiction. Spectacular things can be learned from honest words. Thanks for reading 🙂
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All Poetry Tells
Stories Of Souls
Thanks For
Inspiring
Jade With SMiles😊
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Goodness. I love this. Fantasy meets poetry. Great ending. Love these lines: “It is hard to navigate with a compass that has gone off course.”; “He goes where he wants to be and becomes whichever melody he pleases.”; “Ask him what his name was, and he would change it every time.” This really is an outstanding piece!
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Thank you so much for such kind, thorough feedback. This was a pleasure to write and used the concept of an imaginary friend I used to dream about when I was younger. I’m so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks again, Benjamin.
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Thank you so much. Sorry for such late replies. I have never been so busy before. Time flies. I so appreciate the support. Truly, Frederick. Thank you and keep inspiring
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Ah Yes Dear Jade i Remember
University Days of Triple Majors
And Three Part Time Jobs
Never Missing A Work-Out
Or 10K Race And Attending
Weekly Bar For Dance
And Weekly Church
To Play the
Piano And
Sing For The
Choir All That
Was Missing Hehe
Then From The All
In A Day in The Life
Buffet Sleep HAha
Truly A Luxury Now
To Focus In Flow on
One Task With Money
Or Grades No Contingency
Of Life’s Creativity Always
A Pleasure to
Be Inspired By
Your Poetry Dear
Jade Always Nice to Drop By😊
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You couldn’t have said it more perfectly. Thanks again 🙂
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Welcome Jade😊
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That’s such an interesting way to create a poem. Awesome, J.M.. You’re always challenging yourself to create something unique!
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