Clouds are upside down and you cannot even see.
Bipolar reactions of weather abrupt the cycle.
There are weeds on the ground but there are roses above.
Hues in a poetic form of red and blue growing in the white tufts.
How wonderful it is to image a garden in the sky.
Bet you wish you were not mindful in such a solid state.
You could join me in a dream to drift up above.
You are not a villain if you can understand the poem.
Just leave the pain behind and come with me to the inexistent realm.
It is the time of skies and oceans to switch places.
No more heavy swimming but instead sky dives.
Clouds are upside down and you cannot even see.
There are weeds on the ground but there are roses above.
How wonderful it is to imagine a garden in the sky.
How wonderful it is you may release yourself in falling petals.
For once regret that you ever held back.
Letting a hopeful undertone of spirit bloom.
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Oh Poet Please take me Where
i’ve Never Been Before Oh Poet
Create New Colors Of Ocean
in Sky Raining Down on
me Feather’s
Breath
Wings
i Wear
Gift of Poet
Dance Sing iAware
For There is An Unsigned
Writer i Always Look Forward
To Reading This Gift Jade Sparks in me iFly..:)
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Lovely poem with beautiful imagery….
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Thank you so much, Frederick. My goodness, your comments always blow me away. So lovely, and inspiring. I can never thank you enough.
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Thank you, Navin. I really appreciate you reading and leaving such kind feedback.
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SMiles Dear
Jade Greatest
Treasure You
Will
Give me
Is To Keep
Writing For
Each Poem
You Breathe
Is Another
Feather
For My Wings
There Is
No
More
Treasure
Than
Flight Of Soul😊☺️
This Is The Most
Amazing Part
Of Poetry
Being
Able
To Give
A Greatest
Treasure To
A Complete
Stranger
And So
Many More
Than One Even
After We Pass Away
Out SPiRiT HeART
SoUL
Still
Breathes
Indeed No
Exaggeration
To Dance
Sing
Poetry
Is When
Words Transform
Into Soul So
Much
Greater
Than
Only
Flesh Labels
Of Pyramids
Only Flesh
Becoming Words As
Souls Are More Than
Names
And
Pictographs
In A Pyramid of Dust🏝
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You’re very welcome J ✨
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Very beautiful, deep and loved the imagery in your words.
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Thank you, Jude. That’s a high compliment. It’s great to hear from you. Hope you are well. Thanks so much for the constant support. It means a ton to me.
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Very much my pleasure Lilin. I’m okay, busy marketing my first book. I hope you are well too. 🧡
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That is great to hear! That is a long process and I wish you much luck. I’m doing great too. I am working through the editing process of a novel I’m preparing for publish.
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Such a good title! Awesome words. Nice ending!
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Thanks, Benjamin. I really appreciate the feedback.
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You’re welcome. Keep it up!
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I appreciate the support! Thank you.
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