Garden In The Sky


Clouds are upside down and you cannot even see.

Bipolar reactions of weather abrupt the cycle.

There are weeds on the ground but there are roses above.

Hues in a poetic form of red and blue growing in the white tufts.

How wonderful it is to image a garden in the sky.

Bet you wish you were not mindful in such a solid state.

You could join me in a dream to drift up above.

You are not a villain if you can understand the poem.

Just leave the pain behind and come with me to the inexistent realm.

It is the time of skies and oceans to switch places.

No more heavy swimming but instead sky dives.

Clouds are upside down and you cannot even see.

There are weeds on the ground but there are roses above.

How wonderful it is to imagine a garden in the sky.

How wonderful it is you may release yourself in falling petals.

For once regret that you ever held back.

Letting a hopeful undertone of spirit bloom.

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15 Comments Add yours

  1. Oh Poet Please take me Where

    i’ve Never Been Before Oh Poet

    Create New Colors Of Ocean

    in Sky Raining Down on

    me Feather’s



    i Wear

    Gift of Poet

    Dance Sing iAware

    For There is An Unsigned

    Writer i Always Look Forward

    To Reading This Gift Jade Sparks in me iFly..:)

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  2. Navin says:

    Lovely poem with beautiful imagery….

    Liked by 1 person

  3. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you so much, Frederick. My goodness, your comments always blow me away. So lovely, and inspiring. I can never thank you enough.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you, Navin. I really appreciate you reading and leaving such kind feedback.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. SMiles Dear
    Jade Greatest
    Treasure You


    Give me
    Is To Keep

    Writing For
    Each Poem
    You Breathe

    Is Another

    For My Wings

    There Is

    Flight Of Soul😊☺️

    This Is The Most
    Amazing Part
    Of Poetry



    To Give
    A Greatest

    Treasure To
    A Complete


    And So

    Many More

    Than One Even

    After We Pass Away

    Out SPiRiT HeART




    Indeed No


    To Dance


    Is When

    Words Transform

    Into Soul So





    Flesh Labels
    Of Pyramids
    Only Flesh

    Becoming Words As
    Souls Are More Than

    In A Pyramid of Dust🏝

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  6. Navin says:

    You’re very welcome J ✨

    Liked by 1 person

  7. judeitakali says:

    Very beautiful, deep and loved the imagery in your words.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you, Jude. That’s a high compliment. It’s great to hear from you. Hope you are well. Thanks so much for the constant support. It means a ton to me.


  9. judeitakali says:

    Very much my pleasure Lilin. I’m okay, busy marketing my first book. I hope you are well too. 🧡

    Liked by 1 person

  10. J. M. Lilin says:

    That is great to hear! That is a long process and I wish you much luck. I’m doing great too. I am working through the editing process of a novel I’m preparing for publish.

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  11. Such a good title! Awesome words. Nice ending!


  12. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thanks, Benjamin. I really appreciate the feedback.


  13. You’re welcome. Keep it up!

    Liked by 1 person

  14. J. M. Lilin says:

    I appreciate the support! Thank you.


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