The Universe


The Unsigned Writer

The Universe

Poetry By, J. M. Lilin

I do not want to hold still on a spinning sphere.

I shall spin with it.

If you attempt to hold me back;

You will only see the wonder.

The wonder of dancing in the midst of freedom.

Imagining for only even a moment.

To hold the stars in your palm.

To listen to the sun, sing your name.

To see the clouds, create a canvas.

To wake in a field of daydreams.

I will not let anyone hold my leash.

For I have fallen off the edge.

Into the endless infinity.

I shall never hold still.

I shall spin with it.

I am free. I will be heard by the universe.

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18 Comments Add yours

  1. WOOW😍😍 BACK WITH A BANG!! this was sooo lovely, beautiful and calm! beautifully penned, dear!

    I was reading this while listening to classical music. So the flow really was beautiful.❤️❤️

    Liked by 2 people

  2. J. M. Lilin says:

    Haha, I am flattered. Thanks for making my day. I’m so happy you enjoyed it.

    Love that! When two poetic forms come together, such as music and words. I often get through writer block that way.
    Thanks, Jojo. 🌻

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  3. Hahaha good, flattery makes a person more attractive! And yes indeed. amen, J❤️🙏🏽 I totally agree with you!

    Ps, it’s always my pleasure to read your work!!! No punishment!! Thanks for sharing this with us! ❤️🙏🏽

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  4. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thanks again my friend. I always appreciate you.


  5. Very very beautiful indeed ❤

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Beautiful come back after a long pause. Hope all is well. ❤️❤️

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Ofcourse, Always my pleasure and dito ❤️🙏🏽

    Liked by 1 person

  8. judeitakali says:

    Wow, has an encouraging, epic feel about it, ❤️

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Lia says:

    Very good affirmation and/or aspiration, for anyone to have. Confidence is an inspiring thing! Uplifting. 🙌

    Liked by 2 people

  10. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you!


  11. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you so much. I appreciate the support.

    Liked by 1 person

  12. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you. I had been inspired when I wrote this so I hoped it would have that sort of feel to it.


  13. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you! I hoped this poem would be inspiring for all those dreamers out there, ready for their freedom.

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Lia says:

    Well, beautiful thought and beautifully done, I’ll say. 🔆💕

    Liked by 2 people

  15. J. M. Lilin says:

    As always, Lia, kind and supportive. Thanks so much. 💙🌻

    Liked by 1 person

  16. This is really beautiful

    Liked by 1 person

  17. You’re very welcome

    Liked by 1 person

  18. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you so much. Appreciate it.


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