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Rare Beauty

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Rare Beauty

Poetry By, J. M. Lilin

This world.

Split between something icy and scorching.  

Harsh, yet with so many prepossessing elements.

A miscellaneous combination to create a canvas.

A canvas enveloped in vines that eventually reveal;

Reveal blossoms of a rare, patient beauty.

Eyes beneath lashes that hold a color.

An ocean full of creatures, free to adventure.

Elevations to reach and regard over an impossible landscape.

Split between something sweet and wild.

This world is occasionally difficult to comprehend.

For it has so much to give and show.

So many elements that could seize sanity.

For it has such a rare beauty.

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Jade is a fiction author, poet, and photographer. With a serious obsession for creating whole worlds with nothing but the beauty of words and a passion for creating, she is a driven author with an imagination that is alive and never-ending. She is in the process of writing a fictional series in the genre of speculative dystopian and hopes to share her writing through the Unsigned Writer.

12 Comments Add yours

  1. SRIKANTH says:
    10 Oct 2020 at 4:00 pm

    Beautiful poem 👍🤝

    Liked by 1 person

  2. J. M. Lilin says:
    10 Oct 2020 at 4:10 pm

    Appreciate the feedback. Thank you for reading. 🌻

    Like

  3. Offshorewriter says:
    10 Oct 2020 at 6:46 pm

    This is a beautiful piece. 💕

    Liked by 1 person

  4. J. M. Lilin says:
    10 Oct 2020 at 9:46 pm

    Thank you so much!

    Like

  5. sambee401 says:
    11 Oct 2020 at 5:02 am

    Love this poem!

    Liked by 1 person

  6. J. M. Lilin says:
    11 Oct 2020 at 9:50 am

    Appreciate the feedback. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. 🌻

    Like

  7. bejamin4 says:
    12 Oct 2020 at 6:44 am

    Like how you can back to this line but switched the ending: “Split between something icy and scorching.”; “Split between something sweet and wild.” This poem reminds me that there is beauty in opposites and variety.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. J. M. Lilin says:
    12 Oct 2020 at 9:52 am

    Exactly what I was going for. I don’t believe that there is such thing as beautiful or ugly, or such thing as good or evil. There is just always something in between that is beautiful and a part of us.

    Like

  9. bejamin4 says:
    12 Oct 2020 at 3:14 pm

    I agree with you; life comes in shades!

    Liked by 1 person

  10. jojo alwaealy says:
    14 Oct 2020 at 2:29 pm

    Omg, soo beautiful once again,J❤️😍. Almost missed this one 😳🙈 you keep amazing me with your work!!! Excellent job👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

    Liked by 1 person

  11. J. M. Lilin says:
    14 Oct 2020 at 2:32 pm

    I am much humbled. Appreciate, as always, the wonderful support you give me. Thanks so much for reading.

    Like

  12. jojo alwaealy says:
    14 Oct 2020 at 2:53 pm

    It’s always my pleasure, J🤭❤️ you know that!!

    Liked by 1 person

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