I wanted to write you a poem, something precious and sweet.
I wanted to give you my soul, through creativity and wonder
Simply words can say it all.
So, I gave you these words, through paper and ink.
I wrote these words with my heart and soul.
Just for you, these words were meant.
To tell you just how much you mean to me.
How I think of you in every awakening hour.
How you rest inside my dreams at night.
So, I gave you these words, through paper and ink.
I wrote these words with my heart and soul.
Only, I do not know what my words should write.
I suppose a song for the summer will have to do.
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Thank you, Kim. Appreciate the comment.
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Beautiful and eloquent!
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Thank you, Rishika. I am much grateful for feedback. Glad you liked it.
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Really nice line: “How you rest inside my dreams at night.” And then I love how things swing back around in the end but slightly different.
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Thank you, Bejamin. I love how you analyze my poetry. It really helps me see how my readers feel and I really appreciate it. I’m glad you liked it.
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You’re welcome!!!
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The last line concludes the piece nicely
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Thank you, Aarushi. I was hoping it would
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Very beautiful.π
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Thank you so much.
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Wow! Beautifulπ
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Thank you so much, Saniya.
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Beautiful β€οΈ loved it!
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Thank you! Iβm glad you loved it.
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Lovely, beautiful and thoroughly meaningful.β€οΈπ€
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This is so sweet β€
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Thank you! Iβm glad you found it meaningful. π Iβd have to say it was a special one for me.
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Thank you so much Niharika. Glad you liked it .π
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I love all your writings. Thank you for posting them here, it’s a blessing π
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Oh, Niharika, that is so kind. It fills me with great joy to hear that you enjoy my work so much. I love – absolutely love – imagining and then writing. I am so grateful for your support and to know I have readers like you, supporting me, inspires me to keep going. Youβre a motivation for me and Iβm grateful for that. Thank you so much and keep spreading your wonderful personality. π
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Always my pleasure, Jade βΊοΈβ€οΈ I can truly understand why it was a special one for you!
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Wow! Beautiful!!β€β€
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Thank you! Iβm so happy to hear that you found it beautiful π
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My pleasure!!ππ
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Don’t thank me sir, it’s my pleasure β€
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Such a beautiful piece π»
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Thank you for the feedback β¨ It is a special piece for me and I am glad you found it beautiful.
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