Nebula Eyes

Penetrating with the color that only you could prefer.

Charismatic in a compelling way of charm.

Full of a glowing observance that never looks away.

Captivating like the ocean, but it is not the waves that you see.

It is a galaxy, with a sparkle that only the stars could match.

Layers of thought hidden inside your nebula eyes.  

What is it that you wonder about?

Could I give a penny for your thoughts?

For you are such a dark silhouette with eyes like a patch of luminous sky.

I’m so intrigued with what you might be thinking, with nebula eyes like those.

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11 Comments Add yours

  1. Wonderful thoughts.. Nicely penned!

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  2. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you! I appreciate your feedback.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. knewtriker says:

    Wow, this was a cool poem. Real deep.

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  4. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you, Knewt! I’m so glad to hear that you liked it.


  5. Tom says:

    Really like this – and I love the title. Thanks for the follow and I’m looking forward to reading more of your work. Tom.

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  6. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you. 💙 This is one of my favorites and I really appreciate the feedback.
    My pleasure. You have some intriguing write-ups.

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  7. Adelaide T. says:

    Love this❤

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  8. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you 😊💙


  9. bejamin4 says:

    Really love that title! And how you wrote the metaphor, using space imagery: “Glowing”; “wonder”; “galaxy”; “sky”. Very well done!

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  10. J. M. Lilin says:

    Thank you, Benjamin! I’m glad you liked it.


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