The Unsigned Writer
Nebula Eyes
Poetry By, J. M. Lilin
Penetrating with the color that only you could prefer.
Charismatic in a compelling way of charm.
Full of a glowing observance that never looks away.
Captivating like the ocean, but it is not the waves that you see.
It is a galaxy, with a sparkle that only the stars could match.
Layers of thoughts hidden inside your nebula eyes.
What is it that you wonder about?
Could I give a penny for your thoughts?
For you are such a dark silhouette with eyes like a patch of luminous sky.
I’m so intrigued with what you might be thinking, with nebula eyes like those.
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Wonderful thoughts.. Nicely penned!
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Thank you! I appreciate your feedback.
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Wow, this was a cool poem. Real deep.
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Thank you, Knewt! I’m so glad to hear that you liked it.
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Really like this – and I love the title. Thanks for the follow and I’m looking forward to reading more of your work. Tom.
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Thank you. 💙 This is one of my favorites and I really appreciate the feedback.
My pleasure. You have some intriguing write-ups.
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Love this❤
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Thank you 😊💙
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Really love that title! And how you wrote the metaphor, using space imagery: “Glowing”; “wonder”; “galaxy”; “sky”. Very well done!
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Thank you, Benjamin! I’m glad you liked it.
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