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Nebula Eyes

Posted by Jade on 14 Jul 20206 Apr 2023

Penetrating with the color that only you could prefer.

Charismatic in a compelling way of charm.

Full of a glowing observance that never looks away.

Captivating like the ocean, but it is not the waves that you see.

It is a galaxy, with a sparkle that only the stars could match.

Layers of thought hidden inside your nebula eyes.

What is it that you wonder about?

Could I give a penny for your thoughts?

For you are such a dark silhouette with eyes like a patch of luminous sky.

I’m so intrigued with what you might be thinking, with nebula eyes like those.

Published by Jade

Jade is a fiction author, poet, and photographer. With a serious obsession for creating whole worlds with nothing but the beauty of words and a passion for creating, she is a driven author with an imagination that is alive and never-ending. She is in the process of writing a fictional series in the genre of speculative dystopian and hopes to share her writing through the Unsigned Writer. View all posts by Jade

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singhpiyush6089 says:

13 Jun 2020 at 11:57 am

Wonderful thoughts.. Nicely penned!

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J. M. Lilin says:

13 Jun 2020 at 11:58 am

Thank you! I appreciate your feedback.

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knewtriker says:

15 Jun 2020 at 4:36 pm

Wow, this was a cool poem. Real deep.

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J. M. Lilin says:

15 Jun 2020 at 4:41 pm

Thank you, Knewt! I’m so glad to hear that you liked it.

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Tom says:

26 Jun 2020 at 12:19 pm

Really like this – and I love the title. Thanks for the follow and I’m looking forward to reading more of your work. Tom.

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J. M. Lilin says:

26 Jun 2020 at 12:26 pm

Thank you. 💙 This is one of my favorites and I really appreciate the feedback.
My pleasure. You have some intriguing write-ups.

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Adelaide T. says:

29 Jun 2020 at 1:33 pm

Love this❤

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J. M. Lilin says:

29 Jun 2020 at 1:34 pm

Thank you 😊💙

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bejamin4 says:

30 Jun 2020 at 5:09 am

Really love that title! And how you wrote the metaphor, using space imagery: “Glowing”; “wonder”; “galaxy”; “sky”. Very well done!

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J. M. Lilin says:

30 Jun 2020 at 9:03 am

Thank you, Benjamin! I’m glad you liked it.

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